The silence of the night is deafening
As I find myself reaching for a dream
Quietude voices its harsh displeasure
As a whisper hidden within a scream
I lay here gazing at the beauty above
While it illuminates the midnight sky
Full and round and without question
Emotion conveyed in single tear I cry
The solitude of existence confounds
As time slows to keep us pondering
Meaning of life may not be visible
Yet my thoughts continue wandering
Epiphany comes in peaceful night
Putting end to sleepless frustration
Commonalities shared with a moon
Shedding light on Mother’s creation
Much like the light cast from up above
Serenity bathes me in a brilliant clarity
As my radiance shines for others to see
I am singularly splendid in my sincerity
Like an oasis amidst the endless ocean
Alone yet surrounded by abundant life
I shed my light when and where I can
In hopes of lifting spirits; ending strife
A revelation of blue moon’s quiet secret
I see it’s light comes from other direction
Much like the light I try to bring to others
I’m not the source, but a glorious reflection
There are so many brilliant lines, this poem is a true masterpiece.
Wow! I keep reading it…
Thank you Aubrey. That is the most humbling compliment. Masterpiece? WOW. I’m speechless
As I am just as speechless… your portrayal is precise.
thanks again Aubrey. So glad this moved you.
Beautiful writing, I loved the ending and it offers much to learn and also, brighten one’s soul.
Thank you Oloriel. I am glad you liked it.
how do I howl perfection to give this poem its due respect…
awh-awh-awh-awhooooooooooo
Brilliant Sir John
Wow Marcus. Thanks for that. I am so flattered. Roars to you my friend
What stunning revelations, my friend! Yes, you know you are quite capable of “Masterpiece” status as you’ve had many now!! 🙂
Awwwww shucks D. Such awesome praise. I am glad you liked it.
Beautiful. The words in this poem are just so compelling to me, and the ending is a perfect way to wrap up a perfect poem.
Thank you so very much.
this sparks a lot of emotion in me as I’ve spent many a night gazing upward … the sense of serenity you spoke of is very strong in those moments. beautifully captured.
and thank you for your kind comment about me. even though I have trouble accepting it, I truly do appreciate it. =)
xo
Thank you. I am glad this stirred emotions. As far as my comment, I call them as I see them. Thanks again Lauren
XO
John