The colors move and the colors twist
So gently to and fro within the mist
Forming shapes of things unseen
Showing me where my life has been
This vast array, so many shades of light
Cast by sunshine such a beautiful sight
Silhouettes of my long lost lovers dance
As notes from guitars put me in trance
Such vivid hues recall each sight and sound
Highlights of my memory now can be found
This myriad of uniquely stunning luminosity
Heightens my senses; piques my curiosity
I find myself adrift, miles away in my mind
Neither searching for, or even hoping to find
A better place, for it cannot exist beyond this
My utopia here amidst the sunlight and mist
Beautiful colors and designs, poetry enjoyable, please change yellow color to something else though as it’s not legible. Nice job otherwise!
Good call. My background is black but I forgot about if it is being read on a white page or in the reader. Thanks for the heads up. Glad you liked it.
absolutely. have a great evening
This had me saying “what the hell? Freakin awesome” in the middle of it- LOL, and it just got better with each perfectly placed word my friend. Spectacular! Great image too.
Thanks Elizabeth. Such awesome words about my words. I treasure your opinion and appreciate your appraisal of my work. Hope you’re doing well my friend.
Rockin it out over here. Surgery went well and recovery is going good.
Awesome. So glad to hear it. I was pretty sure there was no worries. Glad you came through with flying colors. LOL. Colors…….see what I did there? LMAO so ashamed…….
LOL. I DOOOO see what you did there. Clever chap!
Very cool! Love the different colors, love the words.
It’s like a painting! 🙂
Lots of love and Hugz ❤
Thank you Patty, Hope it brightened your day.
XO
John
An exquisitely colorful glimpse into your awesome soul!!! 🙂
Thank you D. This was one of those Almost free write moments. LOL. The image and the guitar/woman’s figure in the abstract color burst made the pen move.
I love this one , John 🙂 Such vivid imagery, and, of course, colour. a Bright and Light loving poem!
Thank you Morgan. I appreciate your inspirational support
Have a Delightful and Blessed Weekend ~
I like this one. Good job with color/word play.
Thanks Johnny. Glad you enjoyed it.