These eyes have seen, and this body has felt
Many years of adversities and obstacles
Trials and tribulations.
I have stepped much too close to the edge
Played with fire, burned badly by the flame
Been left weary and weak
Tried and tested, pushed and proven
Rocked and rolled, left for dead
To see light of day again
My self my opposition, a worthy adversary
To you I can only find these words to say
Listen closely and take heed
Go ahead
Knock me down
I will get up
Keep on
Knock me down again
Again I will get up
Persist
Push me over yet again
Once more I stand
Be strong
Drive me down hard
I lift myself smiling
That all you got?
Send me reeling this time
Joy accompanies my ascent
Throw me over
Painful reminders of long ago
Pride sees me up one more time
Grind me into the dirt
Weakened I continue to stand
Stand and fight for my life
No longer can you make me fall
I watch your expression; surprise
Laughing, I rise one last time
I rise like the Mighty Phoenix
As you, my Demons, realize
That you are truly FUCKED
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Thank you for the reblog. I consider that the ultimate flattery.
your welcome…but it is you that gets the thank you for a wonderful post
enjoy your day
jinxx
your welcome…but it is you that gets the thank you for a wonderful post
enjoy your day
jinxx
My amazing friend — I write of being shattered and waiting for someone to put me back together and you write of being knocked down and picking YOURSELF back up again and soaring in victory. Your writing, your comments and your frequent words of inspiration are like comforting hugs reassuring me that I do indeed have the strength necessary to keep fighting. Another powerfully effective write. Much love, John!!
Thank you so much D. I am glad this spoke to you in that way. Everyone has the strength to overcome. I truly believe that. What lacks in most (and many times in myself, especially in my younger days) is the belief in self to fight tooth and nail for what amounts to our survival and wellness of being. Keep looking within to find and draw from that strength. I promise you it is there. I shows up in your writing from time to time as well. Try and tune into it when you recognize it.
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Be the Phoenix….
Thank you for the reblog. I am glad you liked this enough to bring it to your followers as well. Ultimate flattery.
You are most welcome. It touched a place in me too.
Love and Light
Nice! Phoenix it up! Not everyone chooses, or is able to face adversity with such vigor and confidence!
Thanks E. Not all days do I feel the strength emitted from these words, but with time comes confidence. Remember that. Defiance in the face of adversity can be a powerful ally, but can be a hindrance as well. Common sense must always prevail. That reality just doesn’t make for such powerful poetry though. lol. Have an awesome Sunday my friend
LOL… Accurate! You have a great Sunday as well!!!!
Beautiful word imager. The last three stanzas were my favorite.
Thank you Ciara. I am glad you enjoyed it.
I really enjoyed this. Very inspiring! looking forward to reading more of your stuff 🙂
Thank you Ladysequoia, and thank you for the follow. I hope you find much to your liking. Drop in any time.
Most definitely. Seems almost we have a similar style 🙂
Love this. I relate to this a lot, actually. My blog recently has turned to lighter thoughts. In the past, over the last several years, it has not been as such. Life can be cruel, and it is up to us how we react. You fight back and get up again and laugh in the face of challenges. It takes a strong heart to do so, and courage. You clearly have both.
Thank you so much Jess. Life can be cruel. I have had my share of hardship. Much of it self imposed, so it seemed very natural to write this piece as a struggle with inner demons, but it is equally appropriate for any of life’s struggles. Thank you for your kind words. I need to go for a run now. Be well Jess.
Rising too.
Good to know. Rise every time. Be the last to rise and no one remains to knock you down any longer.
Interesting perspective … experience?
Just that I have struggled for many years of my life with various inner demons. Addiction being the most formidable, and have risen again and again to always find better days and brighter horizons.
Amazing! I really love this one John!
It’s such a emotional yet strong piece. I adore it.
Lots of love
Patty
Thanks Patty. This one came from the heart to be sure. I am glad you liked it.
I left you a couple notes on quip. We are all ready to start anytime you find the time to start us off. I am looking forward to writing with you. If you have any questions, drop me an email.
XOXO
John
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Amazing poem by John! I love this!
Thank you Patty for the Re-Blog. I consider this the sincerest form of flattery when a talented writer such as yourself chooses to share my work with her readers. I am truly humbled.
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I see this, hate it, but am trying to be in the present
Thank you. I consider the reblog the most sincere flattery. So glad you wanted to share my work with your readers as well.
John, You say so much in few words! Powerful stuff! Compliments! Patty sent me over for a “visit”! Phil from http://excuseusforliving.com/
Glad you liked it Phil. The more the merrier. Drop in any time and I hope you find much to your liking.
Be well
John
Fantastic writing…wow!
Thank you. Glad you liked it. Drop in any time. I can’t wait to look into your blog as well. Thanks for the follow and kind compliment.
my pleasure.
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Excellent!! Reblog!!
Thank You Dr. A reblog is such an honor. I am very flattered.
You’re welcome! Great post … Love the Phoenix & the meaning behind it!!
This is so full of passion – passionate for hope and life. Very inspiring. 🙂
Thanks so much.
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Thank you for the re-blog. I am flattered you would share this with your followers.
Most deservedly welcome. TY for sharing originally.
I agree with Patty, wonderfully written.
Thank you. Much appreciated.
very welcomed